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Post by Jamjarmaster on Mar 6, 2009 16:26:23 GMT
*This story was originally created by jamjarmaster / / Jackson, twiddlijig and toffee. Hope you enjoy it!* [glow=red,2,300]Chapter 1. Where's my cereal?[/glow]
'Where's my cereal?' Billy Bob asked when he got into the kitchen. He walked over to the cupboard to get a packet of Cornflakes when...
AAHHHH!!! A man was hiding inside! He pushed the hysterical Billy Bob away and ran off, jumping through a window. When Billy Bob recovered from the shock, he saw a note stuck on an empty Rice Krispies packet:
[shadow=red,left,300]I want Cornflakes! I will be waiting at 123 Fake Street today at 4. If Cornflakes isn't there, I will kill my hostage, a giant marshmallow![/shadow]
Signed, The Cereal Killer! 'C-cornflakes.. A giant marshmallow! I have to stop him! You will pay, Cereal Killer!' Billy Bob declared. This meant war!
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Post by Jamjarmaster on Mar 6, 2009 16:27:03 GMT
Post around and tell me what you think of this first bit.
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Post by twiddlijig on Mar 6, 2009 18:02:22 GMT
i think the cereal killer's henchmen should be an ill-tempered seabass and the notorious: dancing milk!!!!!!!!!!!!! (see left[my avitar dammit!])
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Post by Jamjarmaster on Mar 6, 2009 21:00:44 GMT
Yeah, good idea! More soon.
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Post by twiddlijig on Mar 14, 2009 13:55:25 GMT
no more delays! next chapter!
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Post by Jamjarmaster on Mar 15, 2009 13:39:42 GMT
Chapter 2: [glow=red,2,300]You are mine now![/glow]
Billy Bob was bored. He was only interested in things cereal related, so Sports and TV were unknown to him. He was too scared to go after the maniacal Cereal Killer. 'I want.. my cereal!!!!' Billy Bob screamed.
What was Billy Bob going to do? Post in your ideas!
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Post by twiddlijig on Mar 18, 2009 19:49:04 GMT
that's not a chapter! thats just a bit of procrastination and pointlessness! you only want more ideas! i'm not impressed!
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Post by Jamjarmaster on Apr 13, 2009 13:32:45 GMT
Blah. Who cares? Anyway post ideas cause I've got writer's block!
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Post by khdude on Apr 13, 2009 15:29:37 GMT
Cool. you should post the one from school aswell. As for ideas i have none right now but i'll start thinking. Nice Simpsons reference btw.
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Post by Jamjarmaster on Apr 13, 2009 15:37:34 GMT
This is meant to be it, just kinda twisted.
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Post by shaymeister on Apr 16, 2009 14:32:31 GMT
this story is crap
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Post by darster on Apr 17, 2009 18:36:03 GMT
ya and boring
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Post by twiddlijig on Apr 24, 2009 21:55:48 GMT
it's just getting started. you'll see...
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Post by shaymeister on May 28, 2009 15:26:04 GMT
it is not getting started
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