A Masamune. EXE Story - Feedback Thread

[Masamune. EXE]

Ok Guys. I hope you've read my Explanation Thread for my series of stories.

This then, is the Feedback Thread. You may post any critisism or compliment you wish here. I am open to both.

I shall also post here when a new story of mine is released. ;D

[Jamjarmaster]

Well, the first story thing is very good, but maybe you should put in pronuciations for names. And it can be hard to read with the quotation marks (" eg " ).

Good story though.